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Saturday, December 16, 2006

feedback ( and a little fixing )..as they say, sometimes we forget..

BOO-BOOS AND FEEDBACKS
 
don't get me wrong, manong vic. its completely absorbing and exciting. The setting reads detailed and authentic. there's some gap though:

Her name was Arabella Dolores...  ...This kept her Father afloat even if he spent quite a fortune on his wife and two kids. Arabella is the second child. Five years stood between her and her brother Joselito..

"Mark?..No this is not Kitty. This is her younger sister..Kitty's dead, but she left me a message for me to tell you..."

guess it was intentional, wasnt it? to catch whos actually reading... ha ha ha.

but i really love it.

sonny

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Oooops! That was a boo-boo, happens to scriptwriting..the boss would say.."Change one of the chracters, we will have a sequel.." So sorry, I went back to part 2 and with the help of a little mouse ( not Mickey ) I was able to set things correctly..Yes, there will be a sequel but this wont be in series anymore..It will be one complete work..and it will take me about 6 months to write..and print..Yes printing in Manila is cheaper...And yes, so I can get the right mood and proper settings, I will have to write it in Asingan  during an upcoming trip..don't know when...Most of the settings will take place in the Phil. As they say in the Komik Books at one time, ABANGAN ANG SUSUNOD NA KABANATA...

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