from Edith after reading part 1
Can’t wait for Part 2 of your short story! Ikaw naman, may pa-suspense suspense pa! Regards to you both.
after reading part 2
Naku naman! Ano ba ito? Bitin na naman. Sobra yatang suspense ito. Nevertheless, I was surprised to see that you have come up with Part 2 in such a short time, like a day?!? Wow! Bilib na talaga sa iyo. Keep on writing. ;-)
from AlfredHave you had an agent yet? We could turn this in into a romantic tearjerker flick. Well written.... with a wide imagination. It was entertaining. Thank you.
from Angelito
When I read the first part of the story I thought you were having an affair already with some pretty kababayan. I imagined you as the guy in your story, knowing your past history before you meet Miguelita.( I was a good boy ) But as your story went on, it became more interesting.
In the second part got meatier with combination of a heart throbbing mystery and my appetite of reading became unstoppable. My gosh you are great story teller you even took the middle name of your mom as the surname of that mystery woman. More power for you in your story thriller.
*****
Yes, now I am hooked to the story of Mark and Kitty. Would you believe I had a few hours last night just thinking of the scenarios and actions and plots? Writing it is the good part..But receiving these comments IS THE BEST PART!! It will be non stop action from this point, the beginning of part 3!!!
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